• אנא העתק/הדבק את הודעת השגיאה המופיעה במסך, אם יש כזו.

The score screen currently looks like this: i.postimg.cc/pL5jrww3/Stone-Age-final-score-current.png

This is nice, but it could be a bit clearer. Some suggestions:

1. Make the calculations easier to read by using spacing (e.g. 5 x 3 = 15 instead of 5x3=15): proofreadingpal.com/proofreading-pulse/essays/how-to-format-math-and-equations/
2a. Below the images, add a short description of the formula used:
* Culture: (# cards set 1)² + (# cards set 2)²
* Tools: multiplier x level"
2b. This text could also use a different non-player colour to make it even more clear what each term represents (e.g. the agriculture level would be in green, the multiplier in black).

A very rough mockup of one column to easily see what I mean: i.postimg.cc/bvXtt68r/Stone-Age-final-score-proposed.png

• בבקשה הסבר מה רצית לעשות,מה עשית ומה קרה

• מה הדפדפן שלך?

• בבקשה העתק והדבק את הטקסט המוצג באנגלית במקום בשפה שלך. If you have a screenshot of this bug (good practice), you can use a picture hosting service of your choice (snipboard.io for example) to upload it and copy/paste the link here. האם טקסט זה זמין במערכת התרגום? אם כן, האם היא תורגמה במשך יותר מ -24 שעות?

The score screen currently looks like this: i.postimg.cc/pL5jrww3/Stone-Age-final-score-current.png

This is nice, but it could be a bit clearer. Some suggestions:

1. Make the calculations easier to read by using spacing (e.g. 5 x 3 = 15 instead of 5x3=15): proofreadingpal.com/proofreading-pulse/essays/how-to-format-math-and-equations/
2a. Below the images, add a short description of the formula used:
* Culture: (# cards set 1)² + (# cards set 2)²
* Tools: multiplier x level"
2b. This text could also use a different non-player colour to make it even more clear what each term represents (e.g. the agriculture level would be in green, the multiplier in black).

A very rough mockup of one column to easily see what I mean: i.postimg.cc/bvXtt68r/Stone-Age-final-score-proposed.png

• מה הדפדפן שלך?

• אנא הסבר את ההצעה שלך במדויק ותמצית כדי שיהיה קל ככל האפשר להבין למה אתה מתכוון.

The score screen currently looks like this: i.postimg.cc/pL5jrww3/Stone-Age-final-score-current.png

This is nice, but it could be a bit clearer. Some suggestions:

1. Make the calculations easier to read by using spacing (e.g. 5 x 3 = 15 instead of 5x3=15): proofreadingpal.com/proofreading-pulse/essays/how-to-format-math-and-equations/
2a. Below the images, add a short description of the formula used:
* Culture: (# cards set 1)² + (# cards set 2)²
* Tools: multiplier x level"
2b. This text could also use a different non-player colour to make it even more clear what each term represents (e.g. the agriculture level would be in green, the multiplier in black).

A very rough mockup of one column to easily see what I mean: i.postimg.cc/bvXtt68r/Stone-Age-final-score-proposed.png

• מה הדפדפן שלך?

• מה הוצג על המסך כאשר נחסמה (מסך ריק? חלק ממשק המשחק? הודעת שגיאה?)

The score screen currently looks like this: i.postimg.cc/pL5jrww3/Stone-Age-final-score-current.png

This is nice, but it could be a bit clearer. Some suggestions:

1. Make the calculations easier to read by using spacing (e.g. 5 x 3 = 15 instead of 5x3=15): proofreadingpal.com/proofreading-pulse/essays/how-to-format-math-and-equations/
2a. Below the images, add a short description of the formula used:
* Culture: (# cards set 1)² + (# cards set 2)²
* Tools: multiplier x level"
2b. This text could also use a different non-player colour to make it even more clear what each term represents (e.g. the agriculture level would be in green, the multiplier in black).

A very rough mockup of one column to easily see what I mean: i.postimg.cc/bvXtt68r/Stone-Age-final-score-proposed.png

• מה הדפדפן שלך?

• איזה חלק של הכללים לא היה מכובד על ידי עיבוד BGA

The score screen currently looks like this: i.postimg.cc/pL5jrww3/Stone-Age-final-score-current.png

This is nice, but it could be a bit clearer. Some suggestions:

1. Make the calculations easier to read by using spacing (e.g. 5 x 3 = 15 instead of 5x3=15): proofreadingpal.com/proofreading-pulse/essays/how-to-format-math-and-equations/
2a. Below the images, add a short description of the formula used:
* Culture: (# cards set 1)² + (# cards set 2)²
* Tools: multiplier x level"
2b. This text could also use a different non-player colour to make it even more clear what each term represents (e.g. the agriculture level would be in green, the multiplier in black).

A very rough mockup of one column to easily see what I mean: i.postimg.cc/bvXtt68r/Stone-Age-final-score-proposed.png

• האם אפשר לראות את הפרת החוק בשידור החוזר? אם כן, באיזה מספר מהלך?

• מה הדפדפן שלך?

• מה היה המהלך במשחק שרצית לבצע?

The score screen currently looks like this: i.postimg.cc/pL5jrww3/Stone-Age-final-score-current.png

This is nice, but it could be a bit clearer. Some suggestions:

1. Make the calculations easier to read by using spacing (e.g. 5 x 3 = 15 instead of 5x3=15): proofreadingpal.com/proofreading-pulse/essays/how-to-format-math-and-equations/
2a. Below the images, add a short description of the formula used:
* Culture: (# cards set 1)² + (# cards set 2)²
* Tools: multiplier x level"
2b. This text could also use a different non-player colour to make it even more clear what each term represents (e.g. the agriculture level would be in green, the multiplier in black).

A very rough mockup of one column to easily see what I mean: i.postimg.cc/bvXtt68r/Stone-Age-final-score-proposed.png

• מה ניסית לעשות שגרם לפעולה הזו

• מה קרה כאשר את/ה מנסה לעשות את זה (הודעת שגיאה, הודעת פס סטטוס משחק, ...)?

• מה הדפדפן שלך?

• באיזה שלב במשחק הבעייה קרתה (מה היו ההוראות הנכונות)

The score screen currently looks like this: i.postimg.cc/pL5jrww3/Stone-Age-final-score-current.png

This is nice, but it could be a bit clearer. Some suggestions:

1. Make the calculations easier to read by using spacing (e.g. 5 x 3 = 15 instead of 5x3=15): proofreadingpal.com/proofreading-pulse/essays/how-to-format-math-and-equations/
2a. Below the images, add a short description of the formula used:
* Culture: (# cards set 1)² + (# cards set 2)²
* Tools: multiplier x level"
2b. This text could also use a different non-player colour to make it even more clear what each term represents (e.g. the agriculture level would be in green, the multiplier in black).

A very rough mockup of one column to easily see what I mean: i.postimg.cc/bvXtt68r/Stone-Age-final-score-proposed.png

• מה קרה כאשר את/ה מנסה לבצע פעולת משחק (הודעת שגיאה, הודעת פס סטטוס משחק, ...)?

• מה הדפדפן שלך?

• אנא תאר/י את הנושא המוצג. If you have a screenshot of this bug (good practice), you can use a picture hosting service of your choice (snipboard.io for example) to upload it and copy/paste the link here.

The score screen currently looks like this: i.postimg.cc/pL5jrww3/Stone-Age-final-score-current.png

This is nice, but it could be a bit clearer. Some suggestions:

1. Make the calculations easier to read by using spacing (e.g. 5 x 3 = 15 instead of 5x3=15): proofreadingpal.com/proofreading-pulse/essays/how-to-format-math-and-equations/
2a. Below the images, add a short description of the formula used:
* Culture: (# cards set 1)² + (# cards set 2)²
* Tools: multiplier x level"
2b. This text could also use a different non-player colour to make it even more clear what each term represents (e.g. the agriculture level would be in green, the multiplier in black).

A very rough mockup of one column to easily see what I mean: i.postimg.cc/bvXtt68r/Stone-Age-final-score-proposed.png

• מה הדפדפן שלך?

• בבקשה העתק והדבק את הטקסט המוצג באנגלית במקום בשפה שלך. If you have a screenshot of this bug (good practice), you can use a picture hosting service of your choice (snipboard.io for example) to upload it and copy/paste the link here. האם טקסט זה זמין במערכת התרגום? אם כן, האם היא תורגמה במשך יותר מ -24 שעות?

The score screen currently looks like this: i.postimg.cc/pL5jrww3/Stone-Age-final-score-current.png

This is nice, but it could be a bit clearer. Some suggestions:

1. Make the calculations easier to read by using spacing (e.g. 5 x 3 = 15 instead of 5x3=15): proofreadingpal.com/proofreading-pulse/essays/how-to-format-math-and-equations/
2a. Below the images, add a short description of the formula used:
* Culture: (# cards set 1)² + (# cards set 2)²
* Tools: multiplier x level"
2b. This text could also use a different non-player colour to make it even more clear what each term represents (e.g. the agriculture level would be in green, the multiplier in black).

A very rough mockup of one column to easily see what I mean: i.postimg.cc/bvXtt68r/Stone-Age-final-score-proposed.png

• מה הדפדפן שלך?

• אנא הסבר את ההצעה שלך במדויק ותמצית כדי שיהיה קל ככל האפשר להבין למה אתה מתכוון.

The score screen currently looks like this: i.postimg.cc/pL5jrww3/Stone-Age-final-score-current.png

This is nice, but it could be a bit clearer. Some suggestions:

1. Make the calculations easier to read by using spacing (e.g. 5 x 3 = 15 instead of 5x3=15): proofreadingpal.com/proofreading-pulse/essays/how-to-format-math-and-equations/
2a. Below the images, add a short description of the formula used:
* Culture: (# cards set 1)² + (# cards set 2)²
* Tools: multiplier x level"
2b. This text could also use a different non-player colour to make it even more clear what each term represents (e.g. the agriculture level would be in green, the multiplier in black).

A very rough mockup of one column to easily see what I mean: i.postimg.cc/bvXtt68r/Stone-Age-final-score-proposed.png

• מה הדפדפן שלך?